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第一板块：美文共赏

The Best Day on Earth

An ordinary(平常的) morning. You are starting your ordinary day. Do you want it to be ordinary? Ask yourself a question: “What would I do if today was the last day of my life?” I think your answer will be: “I would like it to be the best day of my life.”

I don’t want to upset you, but nobody can ever find out what day is going to be the last. And so it’s better to live each day of your life as if it is the last. I’m not telling you to quit(辞去) your job and spend all your money on traveling. But you can live your life to its fullest by adding some simple things to each day. It doesn’t matter what is going on, but it does matter how you feel about it. Do not forget that life is too short to be unhappy! Here is my recipe for the best day on Earth!

1. A Handful of Happiness

Where can you find it? Take a look inside of you! Happiness doesn’t come from the outside, it is within you. Each moment your life gives you a lot of opportunities(机会) to be happy. If you want to see them, you will. If you don’t, it’s up to you.

2. A Handful of Love

Love is the harmony(和谐) of your soul. A little love can make a big difference to the whole world. We are one. Everyone and everything deserve(值得)your love as well as you do.

“You can search(搜查) throughout the entire(整个的) universe(宇宙) for someone who is more deserving of your love and affection(感情) than you are yourself, and that person is not to be found anywhere. You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire universe, deserve your love and affection.” — Buddha

3. A Handful of Gratitude

Gratitude(感激)is one of the strongest positive(积极的) feelings. We all have something to be grateful for. If you are grateful for everything that you have, you will get more things to feel gratitude for. And this feeling makes you feel good.

“Let us rise up and be thankful, for if we didn’t learn a lot today, at least we learned a little, and if we didn’t learn a little, at least we didn’t get sick, and if we got sick, at least we didn’t die; so, let us all be thankful.” — Buddha

4. A Handful of Dreams

Feel free to dream big dreams and make small steps towards them. You are the creator of your life. Every time you are doing something to achieve your goals you are growing.

“To dream anything that you want to dream. That’s the beauty of the human mind. To do anything that you want to do. That is the strength of the human will. To trust(信任)yourself to test your limits(极限). That is the courage(勇气)to succeed.” — Bernard Edmonds

5. A Handful of Freedom

Feel free to do whatever you want to do! Do everything that makes you happy! Push the limits! Do you remember Yes Man movie with Jim Carrey? Always say “Yes” if you feel that it is the right thing to do right now. This can be the way to your dreams.

6. A Handful of Creativity

Try to be creative in everything you do. Try to do your best every time you are doing something. Do not be afraid to use your imagination. It’s such a pleasure to do something new. Feel the joy of creation!

7. A Handful of Laughter

It’s difficult to overestimate(高估) the role(作用) of laughter. It makes us feel good and unites us. In addition(此外) it is the best medicine! And it certainly can make any day brighter.

8. A Game

Life is a game. Don’t take it seriously. Do you like to play games? Why not play every day? Don’t be afraid to lose, everybody can lose. One day you will be the winner! Our greatest glory(荣誉)is not in never falling but in rising every time we fall.

9. A Handful of Magic

Do you believe in magic? Well, you should. Life is full of miracles(奇迹). In fact, life itself is a big miracle. There are so many things that are beyond our understanding.

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” — Albert Einstein

10. A Holiday

Celebrate(庆祝) every day of your life! Let the spirit(精神) of holiday fill each corner of your heart. Why not? You live your life to its fullest and move towards your dreams!

1.选出你最喜欢的句子(1-3句)，说一说为什么。

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2.谈一谈你最喜欢的本文写作技巧，说明原因。

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3.诵读表演：每人一段，有感情地朗读。

第二板块：写作技能

1.英语写作方法六大原则

1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)

2. adverbial advanced (状语提前原则)

3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)

4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)

5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)

6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)

2.高分作文的五大特性

1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整，层次分明)

2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确，用词精当)

3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰，行文连贯)

4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁，不重复)

5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上)

第三板块：推陈出新

专题一：写景

要点提示:

1)景物描写既要追求独特性，也要注意其思想内涵，切忌为写景而写景。

2)时态的把握主要是：栩栩如生型 以现在为核心，时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主;往事再现型 以过去为核心，时态以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。

3)风景描写或场景描写的最后都可以议论或抒情。

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第四板块：通观全局

1.阅读：她用爱创造奇迹

An eight-year-old child heard her parents talking about her little brother. All she knew was that he was very sick and they had no money. Only a very expensive operation could save him now and there was no one to lend them the money.

When she heard her daddy say to her tearful mother， “Only a miracle can save him now，” the little girl went to her bedroom and pulled her money from its hiding place and counted it carefully.

She hurried to a drugstore (药店) with the money in her hand.

“And what do you want?” asked the salesman. “It’s for my little brother，” the girl answered. “He’s really， really sick and I want to buy a miracle.” “Pardon?” said the salesman.

“My brother Andrew has something bad growing inside his head and my daddy says only a miracle can save him. So how much does a miracle cost?” “We don’t sell a miracle here， child. I’m sorry，” the salesman said with a smile.

“Listen， if it isn’t enough， I can try and get some more. Just tell me how much it costs.”

A well-dressed man heard it and asked， “What kind of a miracle does your brother need?”

“I don’t know，” she answered with her eyes full of tears. “He’s really sick and mum says he needs an operation. But my daddy can’t pay for it， so I have brought all my money.”

“How much do you have?” asked the man. “$ 1.11， but I can try and get some more，” she answered.

“Well， what luck，” smiled the man. “$ 1.11， the price of a miracle for little brothers.”

He took up the girl’s hand and said， “Take me to where you live. I want to see your brother and meet your parents. Let’s see if I have the kind of miracle you need.”

That well-dressed man was Dr Carlton Armstrong, a famous doctor. The operation was successful and it wasn’t long before Andrew was home again.

How much did the miracle cost?

( )1. What was the trouble in the little girl’s family?

A. Her brother was seriously ill. B. They had no money.

C. Nothing could save her brother. D. Both A and B.

( )2. In the eye of the little girl， a miracle might be _______.

A. something interesting B. something beautiful

C. some wonderful medicine D. some good food

( )3. The little girl said again and again “…I can try and get some more.” That shows _______.

A. she had still kept some money B. she hoped not to be refused

C. There was no need to worry about money D. she thought money was easy to get

( )4. What made the miracle happen?

A. The girl’s love for her brother. B. The girl’s money.

C. The medicine from the drugstore. D. Nobody can tell.

( )5. From the passage we can infer (推断) that _______.

A. The doctor didn’t ask for any pay B. A miracle is sure to happen if you keep on

C. The little girl is lovely but not so clever

D. Andrew was in fact not so sick as they had thought

分享：1.哪些句子让你难忘，为什么?

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2.表演：5个人分别扮演：narrator, salesman, girl, Daddy, Calton，有表情地朗读全文。

2.我来补充：一场可怕的暴风雨

Last Friday a storm swept through two villages in the New Territories，destroying (摧毁) fourteen homes. Seven others were 1____________ badly damaged(破坏)that their owners had to 2________ them，and fifteen others had broken windows or broken roofs(屋顶). One person was killed，several were badly hurt and 3___________ to hospital，and a number of other people received smaller hurt. Altogether over two hundred people were homeless 4_________ the storm.

A farmer，Mr. Tan，said that the storm began early in the morning and 5_________ for over an hour.

“I was eating with my wife and children，”he said，“When we heard a loud noise. A few minutes later our house fell 6___________ on top of us. We tried our best to climb out but then I saw that one of my children was 7___________. I went back inside and found him，safe but very frightened.”

Mrs. Woo Mei Fong said that her husband had just left for work 8___________ she felt that her house was moving. She ran outside at once 9_____________ her children.

“There was no time 10______________ anything，”she said，“A few minutes later，the roof came down.”

Soldiers helped to take people out of the flooded (水淹的) area and the welfare department (福利机构) brought them food，clothes and shelter.

分享：1.说一说本文描写的思路

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.是什么原因使本文生动?

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