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2014高一英语暑假作业：写作

第三部分 写作(共两节， 满分35分)

第一节： 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

此题A卷同学作答

My interest has been in books instead in food since I went to high school. In the past I was real interested in all kinds of food. In summer day I liked to buy ice creams and cold drinks, while in winter I like to buy sweets and some another food. Whenever I went for walk with my parents I would ask them buy me something. However, after I went to high school, I found I was putting on weight. So, I gave up habit of eating and began to spend money on all kind of books. Now my parents is always complaining that I am a money spender!

此题B卷同学作答

This afternoon I went to see my grandmother by a bus. It was very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy in her arms. In front of her, a young man takes two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the boy curious asking his mother,” What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the mother would say something unpleasant. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile,” Be quiet. The uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have heard the word. His face turned red and then offered one seat for the woman at once.

第二节：书面表达(满分25分)

随着网络的发展，网上购物越来越受到人们的喜爱，网上购物的人也越来越多，请你谈谈网上购物的优点和不足之处。

写作要点：1. 网上购物的优点 2. 网上购物的缺点 3.你的建议

要求：1. 短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。

2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

3. 书写需清晰、工整。

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