网络：热点作文12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet and Piracy. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)网络几乎已经渗透到人们生活和工作的方方面面，包括我们的一些个人隐私
2)网络会对个人隐私产生哪些影响
3)你认为应该如何保障我们在网络上的个人隐私
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的负面影响，提纲第3点要求说明应该如何防止该负面影响，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述如今网络在人们生活和工作的重要地位，引出网络对隐私的侵犯这一问题;分析网络对个人隐私产生的主要影响;说明应该如何保障网络上的个人隐私。
【参考范文】
Internet and Piracy
Internet has penetrated into all the aspects of our life and work. We can study and work by it; we can find a job by it; we can communicate by it; we can entertain by it; we can buy and sell by it. We can do almost everything on the Internet, and almost anywhere anytime.
However, at the same time Internet provides services for us, it is inevitably invading our privacy to some degree. The services on most websites require our registering. If we want to enjoy these services, we have to provide much private information, including our names, gender, address, telephone number and sometimes bank account. Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold. Even sometimes the information will be misused by the criminals.
Considering the above-mentioned, we must enhance the alertness when using the Internet. First, when we need Internet service, we should always log on those big legal websites. Second, if the service requires important private information, you should think twice before you type in it.
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