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Writing Part 3

Sample answer of question 7:

Dear Jenny,

How are you? I hope fine. Thanks a lot for your letter. It is wonderful that your sister is getting married. What a surprise! Well, I think all wedding are quite different, but I can remember when my aunt got married 2 years ago. It was in the summer and of course all guest looked very summery. They all had different types of dresses and suits. I saw lots of red, yellow and orange colours. It was amazing. They had also different kinds of food because not everybody eats the same food. There was fish, meat, soups, different kinds of salats and vegetables. I hope you will enjoy the wedding. Have a nice celebration. Good luck for your sister. I hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Linda

Sample answer of question 8:

As the concert finished, I heard someone call my name. It was my best friend Pedra! We haven't seen each other for ages. I couldn't recognize her. She changed a lot. She looked just perfect. We decided to go to find some quite place where we could have a nice talk. We went to mine house, I made a cup of coffee and prepared some nibbles. We were talking about school, remembering all our boyfriends, all the naughty things that we used to do, about work that we found after school and lots of more. We didn't even realize it was almost 3 a.m.! We would talk until the morning! What a pity we had to say good night. But never mind. We met up next day again.

考官点评：

这两篇作文敢于尝试各种句式，如定语从句，现在分词表示伴随状况等，如'We decided to go to find some quiet place where we could have a nice talk' and 'We were talking about… remembering all our boyfriends, all the naughty things that we used to do…'

用词恰到好处，如prepared some nibbles', 'recognize', 'never mind' and 'just perfect' 。

文章叙述有条不紊，加入一些关联词，使文章前后连贯。

文中也有一些错误和不足之处，如mine house，应改为my house, we would talk until the morning，可以改为we would like to talk until the morning。

当然这些小错误不影响读者阅读，所以不失为很好的作文，可以得满分。

以上就是为大家整理的通用英语PET第四讲：写作解析，希望同学们阅读后会对自己有所帮助，祝大家阅读愉快。

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