①写信人姓名及身份
②写信目的
③主题词
④主题句
⑤问题1
⑥问题2
⑦问题3
⑧承认好的方面
⑨举例1
⑩举例2
11;复述观点
12;提出解决问题的愿望
【模版例文】
Complain about the Dining Service in School
January 6th , 2007
Dear Mr. President,
①This letter comes to you from one of your students. ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to think about.
③As you know, students of us go to the dining-hall three times each day. ④But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes. ⑤For one thing, the food is not nutritious as it should be. ⑥For another, the fare is a little higher than we can afford. ⑦ What's more, sometimes the staff in the dining-hall just bring us steamed bread with their bare hands and you can’t imagine how dirty they are!
⑧Honestly speaking, some measures have been taken and things are improving there. ⑨For example, IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen. ⑩And the attitude of the staff is also changing a little bit. ⑾But there is still much room for improvement.
⑿I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there and make it a better place our students.