按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题;
第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点;关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间;网购可以节省很多成本开支等;其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面;为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣;
第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。
整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他是难题。
外教版
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience。
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating。
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing。
点评：
作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。 第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。 第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。
综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪光词汇，但是，内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。
新东方版：
Online Shopping
作者：北京新东方学校李艳华、陈科
It would be an amazing wonder decades ago to even think about purchasing our favorite gifts by clicking the mouse and just a few days’ wating. While, today, just a few glances and you will find that your dreams have come true—online shopping has been interageted into our daily lives。
No doubt that unprecedented convinence has been brought by online shopping—not to mention the time and labour saved via the Internet. However, more concerns have been given to the inherent shortcomings that born out of online shopping. The images you see on the Internet may seem completely different from the items which have been just delivered to your hands. Besides, the time saved on browsing in a department stroe may be replaced by the time the goods finally find its way to your house。
Faced with such dilemma, what is our resolutions? First and foremost, relevant laws and regulations must be introduecd to supervise the quality and delivery of online commodity. Furthermore, bodies should be establishe to oversee and eradicate the websties which sell fake goods. Zero-tolerance should become the prevailing discipline to preserve consumers’ rights and benefits。
以下为昂立版范文：
Online Shopping
及格版范文——袁美洁：
Nowadays, online shopping has increasingly become a fashion. Nobody will fail to notice that a growing number of people prefer shopping online such as Taobao because it brings us a lot of convenience. Just click your button, and all that you can do is to wait for your delivery to come。
However, everything can be divided into two, and online shopping has no exception. It also has many problems. First of all, most products have very poor quality. When you buy something online, you can not touch or feel them, so their quality is not so good as it looks. What’s worse, it will cause your financial insecurity, because the payment is also done through the Internet. Therefore, your bank account or credit card numbers will be stolen and make you suffer a great loss。
On the whole, through the above analysis, i believe online shopping has a very bright future. Although it has many problems, it is one of the results of modern society. There is a long way to go for us to improve its services。
高分版范文——周秀婷：
One of the controversial issues today is online shopping. According to a recent survey，a large number of consumers are in favor of online shopping as it has become a trend. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it。
On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that online shopping brings customers so much convenience that it is widely recognized as much more time-saving than traditional shopping. Moreover, online customers have access to commodities of such a huge variety and number. Perhaps the primary advantage is that they have the opportunities to compare prices of a product offered by different retailers. On the negative aspect, there is a good chance of buying a defective product, as they cannot examine the quality when shopping online. What’s more, there exist some dishonest and incredible online retailers who may do further damages to buyers’ interests。
As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of online shopping greatly outweigh its drawbacks. People should make better use of shopping and bypass its negative effects. People can never be too careful when shopping online。
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