末一段可改为:
Our country s population control is a wise and necessary policy.If the number of the people in big cities is reduced，traffic will become less crowded.
综上所述，一篇英文要想写得很地道，起码应注意以下几个方面:
①主语是上述四部分之一吗?
②谓语动词是一个吗?(每句话一个，从句也算一句话)这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?(叫做动词的非谓语形式)
③主语与谓语一致吗?
④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?(主、系表除外)
⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?
⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗?
⑦单词有没有拼写错误?
(四)现在，我们已经知道了作文大体上怎样写:
①审题并列出提纲(约5分钟)
②开始写:(1)切题(2)干净(3)少犯错误(4)开门见山(5)闪光点(约20分钟)
③交卷前检查(1)拼写错误(2)语法错误等(约5分钟)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join to a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1、本社团的主要活动内容
2、参加本社团的好处
3、如何加入本社团
书信一般不写标题，告示必须写在首行正中央写上标题，今年标题已经给出：“Welcome to Our Club”。
书信一般无需写日期，告示最好写上(如果正文中交代清楚，不写亦可)，写作标题右下方，不要空行。
告示的正文可写1-3段，针对四级写作三点提纲的特点，最好写成三段，每点提纲各写一段、详细展开即可。书信中开头结尾的套句如自我介绍、写作目的、表示感谢、期待回信等等，在告示中不能使用。告示的正文时态以现在时和将来时为主。
书信的落款是个人，但告示的署名可以是个人或单位，针对考题，应写为单位：某个社团，应写在答题卡中间偏右的位置。
另外，四级写作最好采用缩进式，段间不空行，每段首行缩进4-5个字母并对齐。
下面是根据我在课上讲过的一个告示改写的一篇范文。
写作范文
Welcome to Our Club
June 23, 2007
The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training and contests to be held on each Saturday at the Students’Recreational Center. Five prestigious experts and professors will be invited to be speech lecturers and contest judges. For each speech contest, the first six winners will be given awards.
Attending our club has substantial advantages. Firstly, it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development. Secondly, it can help you to possess self-confidence, enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus life dimensional, colorful and vigorous. To sum up, the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your life.
Students who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week (June 26). Everybody is welcome to attend our club.
Speech Club
参考译文
欢迎参加我们社团
2007年6月23日
演讲社于每周六在学生活动中心举办全校性的演讲培训与比赛。我们将邀请五名资深专家及教授作为演讲教师与评委。每次比赛中，前六名获奖者将被给予奖励。
参加我们社团的好处很多。首先，它能提高你发表演讲的能力，这对你未来的职业和发展将非常重要。其次，它能帮助你拥有自信，丰富你的课外活动，并且使你的校园生活丰富多元、五颜六色、充满活力。总之，参加我们的社团将是你一生中非常难忘的经历。
有兴趣参加的同学们请在下周二(6月26日)之前在你们班长那里报名。欢迎大家参加我们社团。
演讲社
Curriculum all the courses of study offered in school, college, or university
Curricula or curriculums (PL. )
2006,12 四级Direction：
1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会
2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会.
3.我的看法.
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala(公众娱乐表演盛会). Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.
Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.
I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.
点评：
本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体裁，二是题材。
对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这只能得到最基本的分数。虽然模板对于考查学生的语言表达并不益处，但还能测试出考生的语言基本功。从四级考试写作的测试目的来看，还是注重考查学生对基本语法、基本词汇运用能力的掌握情况。所以除了模板之外，考生还要在基本表达上狠下功夫，只有在平时多操练，在考场上才游刃有余。除此之外，学生还要在作文中多采用闪光点，这样就会使作文在基本分数上有所提升，有所突破。
对于题材，本次四级作文的话题是关于人们对于春节晚会的不同看法，属于社会生活类话题，一反常态，没有再次考查校园类话题。但是对于当代大学生来说，与大学生有关的社会话题也是需要关注的，这也说明考试方向的变化：校园类话题与社会热点话题同等重要,这一点对于未来考四级的学生的作文备考的方向有一定的指导意义。
2005 四级作文
Part V. Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3.我认为……
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
参考范文：
Should the Uiversity Campus Be Open to tourism?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attraction. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study . With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
先看问题，根据问题直接找文章对应部分(大部分都是按顺序来的，即第一个问题在文章开头，依次类推，最后问题在文章结束部分)。四级的单词填空基本为文章中现有词汇，但有时候会在问题中变换一下句式，注意用词形式问题(例如主动变被动)
4、熟练掌握阅读技巧。
①摒弃那种先看文章后看问题再看文章的作法，采用先读问题后看文章。两者比较，后者不仅少看一遍文章，节约了时间，而且后者这种有目的，阅读效率更高。 ②采用由下而上的阅读方法(the bottom -upapproach to reading)。读者通过从小的单位着手，如：单词、词组、句子、段落，先理解他们的意思。再将它们连接成文章，而后理解整篇文章的意思。 ③采用由上而下的方法(the top -downapproachto reading)此方法先是读者利用他对文章主题及题型的知识，对文章中所将包含的内容进行推测，然后通过自己的阅读对所猜测的内容进行校对。 当今读者将②③两种方法结合来理解课文的内容，而且这种方法已越来越受到人们的欢迎，我们今后不妨也可一试。 ④采用浏览阅读方式，即读者很快浏览标题、付标题，从而对文章的大意有所了解，并且找出文章中一些重要的信息。而并非仔细地阅读，眼睛通常从文章的一头迅速地移到另一头，了解文章的大意中心，并且决定哪些是重要的，哪些是次要的，这种阅读方式使读者无需浪费太多的时间，从而查找出有用的内容，尽快地了解到文章的大意。
⑤采用扫描型阅读方式。即快速地阅读文章查找自己所需信息，如在电话簿中查一号码，在字典中查找某一单词的意思等，采用此方法的关键是读者必需知道自己要找什么，而不需逐词逐句地进行阅读。这种方法适用 于读者在复习文章、研究文章、写论文、列表格、查地图时。
⑥采用细读方式(read in detail)。这种方式要求读者仔细地、深入地对文章中的字、词句进行分析、研究。不仅要求读者了解字面意思，而且要求读者把握文章细节，了解到文章所隐含的意思。
⑦采用评读方式(critical reading)。即读者对所读文章进行评论，提出自己的观点见解。这就要求读者充分使用句法的逻辑的文章的文化背景知识，对文章作深入细致的研究，从而更好地陈述自己的观点见解。
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