The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity替换more and more popular
Coincident with…非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into
Current ( currently )替换now
Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals替换more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start替换To begin with
We can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换In addition / Besides
Deliver替换send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to
Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )
Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词