回顾初中三年的成长过程，一定有很多感受。如果要你从学习。生活和兴趣爱好等方面作出自我评价，你认为自己在哪些方面比较突出？哪些方面需要改进？把它写出来。词数60-80（15分）

要求：1. 短文语句通顺，规范，意思连贯，字迹工整。2. 文中不能出现真实人名，校名，地名等。

学生习作

I have studied in my middle school for 3 years. I have learned a lot. I learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play ping-pong. Volleyball and football and my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects. I am best for English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a few weak. I think will try my best learning them well.

习作评析

优点：本文要求写一篇回忆初中三年的成长过程并作出自我评价――在学习生活和兴趣爱好等方面的文章。上这篇作文要写的范围很广，但是写作依然要按提示进行。本文习作写得较好，得分11分。全文语言运用较为合理，语义也很规范，时态运用基本正确。文章基本符合规定的写作要求。本文开头有两句运用了现在完成时（I have studied in my middle school for 3 years. I have learned a lot. ）短语not only …but also…；make friends 以及动词不定式与疑问词连用（I learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.）这些是很难得的。

不足及修改方法：本文丢分之处有四处，共丢4分：

① I often play ping-pong. Volleyball and football and my friends. 一句中的and （划线部分）表示“和……一起”，应该用with.

② Of all my subjects. I am best for English and Chinese. 一句中，for应该改为at ，这样才表示“最擅长……”

③ But my math and physics are a few weak. 一句中，a few 应该改为a little，修饰形容词只能用a little ， 修饰复数名词才用a few.

④ I think will try my best learning them well. 一句中，learning 应该改为to learn ， try one's best 后面接动词不定式。

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