英语六级翻译指导及练习

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例4 The professor came to our school and warmly welcomed by the teachers and students.(句子的后半句用被动式就可以只安排一个主语"the professor"。)

汉语虽然也有"被"、"由"之类的词表示动作是被动的,但这种表达远没有英语的被动语态那么常见。因此,很多英语被动句在翻译时就被译成了汉语的主动句。反之,很多汉语的主动句在译成英文时会变成英语被动态。

Exercise Eight

1. _______________ (随着工商业的发展),the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced.

2. Travel can widen our knowledge, _____________ (扩大我们的眼界),and make one open-minded as well.

3. Cars are responsible for most of the smog in cities, _______________ (这已经对环境造成了严重的污染).

4.Modernization will be entirely possible in the first half of the21st century, as long as we ________________(坚持认为)that economicdevelopment is the center of all our work.

5. He was convinced on the basis of ____________(当时已出现的情况)that there would be a long and difficult struggle.

1. With industries and business developing quickly

解析:本句意为:随着工商业的发展,许多大城市的树木数量正急剧减少。"随着......"要用介词with或alongwith。"工商业"既包括工业也包括商业,翻译时要注意译文的完整性。本句也可译成:With the quick development ofindustries and business.

2. broaden our horizon

解析:句中的短语widen our knowledge意思是"扩大我们的眼界",make one open-minded是同义复指,它们表示相同的意思却在英语里使用不同的表达,以避免用词重复。这是英语行文的一个技巧,考生在翻译时应尽量避免 wordiness(用词累赘),这个技巧在写六级作文时也值得借鉴。本句还可以译成:expand our vision或extend our sight.

3. which has seriously polluted the environment

解析:"这已经对环境造成了严重的污染"中的"这"显然是指前半句提到的the smog in cities,这里需要的是一个非限制性定语从句,补充说明城市烟雾对环境的影响。本句还可以译成:which has brought serious pollution to the environment。

4. hold an idea/ insist on the idea/ stick to the idea

解析:本句意为:只要我们坚持以经济建设为中心,那么在21世纪上半叶实现现代化是完全可能的。本题考查固定短语"坚持认为"的说法。除了答案提供的说法外还有以下说法大家可以参考:persist in the idea/ persevere in the idea/ adhere to the idea等。

5. what had appeared by then

解析:"情况"在这里没必要直译成situation或case,本句含义是指基于当时的情况使他确信,因而可以用what引导作basis后置定语。还有一点需要注意的是,"当时已出现"要求我们在翻译时准确选择时态。by then与过去完成时态想一致,也可以用at that time。